You need a little more up to date info on AIDS. They have come forth with a few new break throughs in the science world like an experimental vaccine
- 18/12/2002
- 11:16:07
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
That was one damn good essay.
- 01/05/2002
- 10:09:29
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
Nice topic. I am a firm believer in the Ganja. Good opening paragraph and body. Keep with the examples.
- 22/04/2002
- 07:30:36
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
The fact that it was a science fair project kinda turns me off. I dont think that it would really be considered an essay, but it was still very good. You had all the information laid out in an orderly fashion. It was a bit lengthy, but Hey what can you expect for a project.All in all I think it was very good
- 18/04/2002
- 13:02:09
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
You had a very good opening paragraph. There were a couple of spelling and punctuation errors that could have been fixed without much effort. Try and expand on your topics, because you are talking about a whole 10 years here, not just a coupla weeks. You had a good structure, and a fairly good knowledge of what you were talking about. Just try and use more information.
- 18/04/2002
- 11:56:29
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.