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Describe in your own words how the deviancy amplification spiral operates to produce a 'moral panic'. Illustrate with two examples.
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How is gender identity influenced by social structures?
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In what ways can occupation and employment affect identity?
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Arguments
Although the information in this essay is represented well and also well written, you have not formulated any thought-provoking arguments that ask the questions of why?For instance, Why are influental figures so against the legalization of this relatively harmless drug? Is it because they are terrified of putting their political positions in jeopardy by 'jumping on shaky ground?' Also, as a society, are we worried that if the drug is legalized, we invite a snowball of legislative changes that could create a 'legalized drug-abusing culture'?. There are many questions surrounding this extremely controversial issue and i just thought it would have been nice to address some of them.Otherwise very well done.- 24/03/2004
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Grammar
The content of this essay is not in question but the grammar needs careful revision and correction. Terms like:"The main complain and concern" should beThe main complaint and concernor"and this way undercuts the competition for a sufficient length of time"should be: and by this way, undercutting the competition for a sufficient length of time.Maybe this essay should be proof-read, and advice to the author would be: Don't worry about using the word synonyms until you have perfected the rest of the essay structure or the finished product will not look right.- 24/03/2004
- 07:10:25
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