Looks great...do you have a bibiography?
- 17/04/2004
- 17:08:42
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nice connections well written, just watch you grammar there are some wrong tense words or missed words that wold make this essay top notch.Good Job
- 07/04/2004
- 01:48:37
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GREAT JOB, GREAT FLOW, GREAT GREAT ESSAY.Give me some pointers please!Where is the 4th happyface with the huge ear to ear smile.
- 06/04/2004
- 22:15:06
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Your right your rambling just a bit...What is your essay about? Fastfood-Ok, but what point about fast food are you traying to make. You need a focusing line.Each paragraph or thought should lead to the next.Watch your syntax. Instead of "...aren't these THE represents of fast food?" try ..."aren't these THE representation of fast food?Sorry, your post said no one rates your work.Chin up, we all need to learn. Do I dare ask you to rate my work now?Any comment will be welcome.
- 06/04/2004
- 21:20:06
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