I have read this essay a few times, and I am disappointed at the standard of writing, and the quality of the material. I had to read it several times before the meaning became clear.It is useful to have websites like this one, where students can look at material related to their subject area, to get some ideas, or an insight into what is required when writing an essay. This essay offers very little in the way of useful instruction. It lacks structure, and does not flow, and contain numerous grammatical inconsistencies. The syntax needs addressing.It is important for members, that the quality oof material presented is useful, and relevant, so members have confidence in your service.I would be interested to know what the grade was for this work.RegardsKay London
- 28/03/2004
- 09:25:53
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.