good essay... weird topic. good vocab. nice use of examples
- 20/04/2004
- 11:57:45
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
not set out that well. but i can tell pretty good research. overall quite good, but could try and make it flow better
- 20/04/2004
- 11:55:39
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
its well written, big words... the paragraphing could be better.
- 20/04/2004
- 11:52:52
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
its well written, but simple enough for a bozo (lol- me) to understand. you dont need any background info. laid out clearly and well researched.
- 20/04/2004
- 11:49:57
- Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
very current topic. well researched, and it is very good all the way through. the ending has very good points to end on, but the way thay are worded seems to let down the essay. they arent written quite as intelligently as the rest. overall v. good
- 31/03/2004
- 10:34:01
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
pretty interesting topic, written well (average), and is clear and consice (is that how ya spell it?)
- 31/03/2004
- 10:25:58
- Score: 7 out of 17 people found this comment useful.
this is a really good essay... i am really impressed by the vocab! its a valid and well agrued point thats explained clearly
- 29/03/2004
- 14:01:41
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
this is a good essay, but i talks a ton about specific tv shows etc... instead of saying how this represents them and the perception this creates from the public.
- 28/03/2004
- 12:04:30
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.