I liked this one. I like the way you bring out the criticism Arthur Miller has against the society, you bring up the truth. As a conclusion: WELL DONE!
- 08/11/2007
- 02:44:32
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This paper really helped me with my biography of Ernest Hemingway. I got new information and I'm thankful of that. Thanks! It is well written with minor spellingmistakes. Good job!
- 01/04/2004
- 12:27:54
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
What could I say. I think that you brought up, as laska_pl said, the word I a bit too often. But it was a story about you, so you have all the rights of using "I", when talking about a past experiense of yours. This was quite good, as a story about a significate happening in your life, but otherwise, it was bad. Anyway, the world needs storys like this. Keep up the good try!
- 31/03/2004
- 15:03:51
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
You didn't talk about anything but money! You just made sort of a list about the things we need money for and why money is so important. I agree, that we couldn't live without money, but still, it was a bit to repeating. I'm sure you write better next time. No offense!
- 31/03/2004
- 14:59:26
- Score: 13 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
I didn't really get the point, but maybe I'm the only one. As His_Eminence also said, it repeats itself. Maybe if you would drop something out and make it a bit shorter it would get alot better. Take this as constructive, not too serious.
- 31/03/2004
- 14:53:49
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
This essay made me want to become an ecologist. This was so well written and fluent. I wish I could write essays like this someday.
- 31/03/2004
- 14:49:31
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
This was way to short. How could you get a grade like that? It would never work for me.
- 31/03/2004
- 05:16:16
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I agree that strenght training is the most effective way to lose weight. Of course diet should be included. Some of my friends have tried out that and it has worked. I will soon start using the same program as they. This text just confirmed my toughts on counting on strenght training and a calculated diet. Thank You!
- 31/03/2004
- 05:10:35
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is so true! You couldn't explain it more better and simply. You just handled this subject so well. If I were you, I would be very proud of myself!
- 31/03/2004
- 04:55:55
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This was a very covering essay. The writer knew or at least now knows alot about strokes. There was good tips for how to reduce the risk of strokes and where to get help and it also told how to check the blood pressure. Good job!
- 31/03/2004
- 04:46:09
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This is one of the best esays discussing mitochondria that I have ever read, and believe me, there is alot of them. I'm interested in biology, so I started with a feeling that this wouldn't be that good, but as I read further and further it became better and better. I liked it, how about you?
- 31/03/2004
- 01:46:07
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I really liked this essay. Its perspectives made me really interested. I could imagine, that this essay could be published in some anti-drug magazine or as an article telling you not to use drugs and why. The writer analysed almost all consecuenses. That's all I have to say!
- 30/03/2004
- 13:19:28
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.