Dont get me wrong, this essay is good, im sure it scored you decently aswell, just a few things;At the beginning, you should mention that governments came and went because the Weimar Republic was weak and could not give a majority to any one political party, this ment that Hitler could pose as the strongest and in time (over elections) could gain the majority and have the NAZI party in power.Also, you have to mention the people in his regime (Himler, Goebells ect) especially Goebells, as the NAZI's would have never come to power without the propaganda that he was producing. Propaganda was possibly the single most obvious reason the NAZI's came to power.Also mention how he got his Dictatorship because of the special laws he gained after the major fire, these gave him the power to basicly dictate his words and put them into power without having to run them past anyone else. There is also a very interesting conspiracy about the happenings that you should research.One last point, although it may be out of context, perhaps giving a brief history of how Hitler came to politics (After his time in WW1, how he lead the beer hall putsch, why he made scapegoats etc)Aside from all that ive said its a good essay, nothing majorly wrong and the facts you have are correct, just some fine tuning needed. I dont mean to "dictate" (as it were) to you, just help!Thank you!
- 07/09/2005
- 12:14:18
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