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  • Good Job

    This essay is really good work. From the descriptions, it makes me feel like I am there and you are showing me around. Good job.
    • 15/03/2002
    • 13:52:57
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    This was a really good essay except you repeated allot of lines. This makes the essay sound repetative and lazy. If you just take those lines that are repeated and reword them, it will be a great essay. It has allot of facts and good information.
    • 14/03/2002
    • 13:47:36
    • Score: 20 out of 22 people found this comment useful.