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  • 2 paras not an essay make

    An essay can't just be an introduction and a conclusion. This essay only has 2 paras. I can't see how the user got 65% for this paper. It is a waste of space and time.
    • 09/08/2004
    • 03:43:49
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Not really complete

    While the essay makes a very promising start it loses itself midway and can almost be considered incomplete. The Executive Summary and current Market position are well written with good figures and facts to back up assumptions. However there is no Competitor SWOT Analysis, Positioning Statement, Future Growth or Conclusion.Due to the missing sections it can't really be considered a Marketing Plan - but more of a Current Market Scenario - which would lead into the development of a Marketing Plan.
    • 02/04/2004
    • 18:49:58
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.