This 'essay' does a marginal job of barely touching on the meaning of the 13th amendment to the constitution. It only discusses the very basic concepts and doesn't provide more than an elementary level description. Good essay for an 11 year old.
- 05/04/2004
- 10:15:54
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
You could have improved this by placing it into some kind of acceptable essay format. You also could have used complete sentences.
- 05/04/2004
- 10:09:59
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Interesting initial overview of the causes of the Great Depression. Consider delving deeper into the underlying issues that produced the symptoms.
- 05/04/2004
- 03:06:08
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Could be strengthened by maybe using an argumentative approach to essay writing rather than just a straight forward rambling style.
- 05/04/2004
- 03:04:09
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Definitely an informative paper that brings up good points. A couple issues with grammar usage and spelling though.
- 05/04/2004
- 03:01:39
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Interesting exploration of a very sad, real world issue.
- 05/04/2004
- 02:56:04
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Nice essay with very good supporting points.
- 05/04/2004
- 02:54:36
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Very concise and easy to read. Informative, interesting and well researched.
- 04/04/2004
- 00:53:33
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.