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"Personal Privacy vs. National Security" Essay deals with the Patriot Act with comparison and coments dealing with George Orwell's "1984."
- 388 words (2 pages)
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"Brain Washing" This is a free form paper talking about brain washing and George Orwell's novel "1984."
- 375 words (2 pages)
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Just a note...
As far as informative...This paper is excellent. But when it comes to actual writing technique and all that mumbo jumbo, your paper is a bit lacking. I do admire the subject and content though.- 12/04/2004
- 22:52:48
- Score: 10 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
Great Paper
Very well written piece. Very well formatted and informative. Nothing else needs to be said...- 06/04/2004
- 19:19:25
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Just a few comments...
Very well written over all. There are a few sentences that are too lengthy and need to be cut down. Also, you may want to vary sentence structure a bit more. What I mean is that you might try not to have too many sentences structured the same right in a row. That will keep the reader interested. Again, very well written, your "voice" is very strong in your writing.- 06/04/2004
- 18:28:48
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.