i agree that drugs have become a big problem in the US. i think ur essay was well written but the last paragraph needs to be worked on.
- 13/04/2004
- 13:49:36
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I agree with what you said about cell phones being a huge risk. Even the laws making you use a hands free device does not eliminate the dangers of driving while being on your cell phone.
- 11/04/2004
- 15:34:04
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
It think this paper is very well written. I just think you use "American dream" too much.
- 11/04/2004
- 15:24:57
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.