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  • Great job

    Great job with this difficult topic! this essay came in increadibly handy. thank you!
    • 12/04/2004
    • 17:33:25
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Compliments

    Thank you so much for this essay. It provides great information in a clear and easy to read fashion. on my favorites list!
    • 12/04/2004
    • 17:31:09
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Suggestions

    for a 5th grader, you did a great job, but heres a suggestion to make your point more convincing. add some statistics, and back up the facts that you give with sources. for instance, tell how many people in a certain year died as a result of drunk driving, but get the information from a credible source, and put that in the essay.good job!brian miller
    • 12/04/2004
    • 17:23:07
    • Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.