This was a good essay. In your introduction you briefly spoke of all the incidents and then went on to explain what you were talking about. Very nicely written.
- 25/04/2002
- 22:16:33
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This paper needed more information. Like when wyou were talking about the clans and fighting style, you talked about different clans but what made them different. Then the fighting styles you should talk about the different styles and also how they are different.
- 25/04/2002
- 22:08:38
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This was a good essay. It was very informative. I thought that Tom Cruises role was the same as most of his other pictures though. Has something going has a downfall and comes back from it with the girl. this was a good paper though.
- 25/04/2002
- 22:05:12
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
YHou should do more research on freedom rights before attempting this essay. I do a gree that there is a price for freedom but you have to look at the other countries and see what they go through and how little freedom they have and then look at our society and see what we have compare and make stronger statements to back up what you have written about freedom.
- 25/04/2002
- 16:11:40
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I disagree with this essay but it is a well written appeal to capital punishment.
- 25/04/2002
- 15:50:52
- Score: 11 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
I feel that the writer made very good points in this essay and that it was very well written. Same sex marriages should be treated the same as opposite sex marriages.
- 25/04/2002
- 15:41:34
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This was a very good essay. It covered a variety of the wasys we use communication. The only problem I actually saw with the paper is that the word "communication" was used to frequently.
- 25/04/2002
- 15:34:49
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I don't agree that abortions should be legal and the woman's right to choose unless they have been molested, raped or it is going to do harm to the mother to be's life. Other than that there should be no exceptions. This was a good article but I do disagree that it should be a choice.
- 25/04/2002
- 12:40:52
- Score: 4 out of 6 people found this comment useful.