Lots of great detail on a very interesting man. I learned a lot from reading this essay. The thesis paragraph needs to be separated from some of the other information, but still a very well executed biographical essay IMHO. :o)
- 20/04/2004
- 23:36:01
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I can't rate this essay very highly. It's full of grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors. Also, each of the ideas could be expanded upon and explained better.
- 20/04/2004
- 23:31:08
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Well researched and well written. Understandable to a lay person like myself. A timely study of an important subject.
- 20/04/2004
- 23:21:20
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Extremely well-researched and well-written; information is very orderly and understandable. Great use of expert testimony to back up your assertions. :o)
- 15/04/2004
- 09:47:43
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Watch grammar and punctuation."a figure who's actions..." should be "a figure whose actions..."There are other punctuation errors throughout - and I know that most people have a hard time remembering the rules.Otherwise, well-written and informative. I've been studying Shakespeare lately, too, and this essay shed some light on characters not normally discussed at length.
- 15/04/2004
- 09:32:43
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I agree with the other poster, skimba2, that the essay seems to lack a thesis; however, as a purely informational/opinion piece, it was well written. My only suggestions might be to watch spelling & punctuation (the plural of "camera" is "cameras" without an apostrophe) and offer a little expert proof to back up your comments.
- 15/04/2004
- 09:21:53
- Score: 6 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
This was a well-written report of a film. It breaks down the subplots in an understandable way. I would like to see information about the film you watched, such as producer and actors, since there are several films out there and each interprets the story differently. Otherwise, GREAT JOB!
- 15/04/2004
- 09:08:27
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.