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Essay List

• The Korean War- A general summary of "The Forgotten War", including causes and effects

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• A brief essay on Feudalism and the Rise of the Catholic Church

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• Examples of Scapegoating in History, what is a modern example of scapegoating?

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• Summary of Jared Diamond's "Guns, Germs, & Steel"

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• Evil's Triumph In Literature- Provides an interpretation of the quote "In literature, evil often triumphs, but never conquers."

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Comments List

• A brief thought...

  Although your basic argument is well-received, I do not believe that all of the circumstances you cited can be attribute to racism. There are a number of underlying issues that contribute to poverty amongst the minorities, and these were never referred to. However, I believe that you effectively made your point, and the wealth of statistics are quite impressive as well as thought-provoking...
  • 15/04/2004
  • 17:06:55
  • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
    

• In response...

  The title of your essay confuses me a touch, but the content was fine overall. The writing was a bit choppy and repetitive, though, and be aware of grammar and such (prop. use of 'to' vs. 'too'). Despite mechanical and stylistic problems, I saw the overall message as accurate and a fine thesis.
  • 15/04/2004
  • 14:23:57
  • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.