the ideas are clear and very well expressed but the structure is a little off in that the second to last paragraph should have been fit in earlier in the essay. other than that, i think it's well written and true to the book. this essay is a great reference and will spark ideas for others writing about it
- 03/05/2004
- 23:47:39
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
brings out pretty good points, however, needs more of an intro and a conclusion
- 26/04/2004
- 13:58:26
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Very insightful. I think it was well argued and convinces the reader of how helpful miep really was during the holocaust
- 18/04/2004
- 17:16:40
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.