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• Book Report: Jon Mancip White's "Everyday Life in Ancient Egypt" a four paged double spaced book report which recieved an A++ in my Western Civ Honors class

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• Plato's Involvment and Legacies within the Western World. This is a 6-7 page double spaced paper with a biography which recieved an A+ in my Western Civ Honors class

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• Book Report: F.L. Ganshof's "Feudalism" This is a 5 page paper in which recieved a B+ in my Western Civ Honors class

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• Emancipation and Reconstruction

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• The Catcher in the Rye - Journal

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• The Lord of the Rings vs Dr. Jekyl and Mr. Hyde

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Comments List

• Pretty good

  The essay is pretty good content wise however the style could use a litle bit of help. Avoid using the work \"like.\" In addition write in third person (don\'t use \"you\" or \"I\"). Another thing to work on would be not to use the word \"probably,\" just say what you mean. Sorry to rant...butother than those things..i enjoyed it :)
  • 07/11/2004
  • 17:12:39
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• My review

  In the 6th paragraph, who is they? Also the essay is all over the place. you are proving a lot of different points in a lot of different ways in each paragraph instead of starting with one idea or point and proving it to be true throughout the essay. The essay is NOT BAD though.
  • 25/04/2004
  • 22:19:27
  • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.