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  • Hmmm...

    I'd really like to see the bibliography for this. Your begining about World War I coincides with things I have studied over the years. However, this is good for 10th grade. Almost too good...
    • 25/05/2004
    • 02:36:55
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Suggestions

    This is a good 10th grade paper. You could go a little more in depth with it though and find the meanings and symbolism, but maybe this is supposed to be a book report. There are a few editing issues that could be worked out. For example, the bottom of the third paragraph, and you could use a thesaurus to have more variety in the words. These are just suggestions. Still, a good paper.
    • 09/05/2004
    • 14:37:24
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • Well done

    I like this paper a lot, and I'm glad you got an "A" on it. It makes me want to go out and find this book. However, I am unclear as to whether this is a book report or an evaluation essay. It is still a well written essay though.
    • 05/05/2004
    • 00:44:42
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Not bad

    I think this is a good start, but you need to expand on your ideas. Also, in an opinion paper you should give examples that support your opinion and brought you to your idea. I think the word choice and ideas are good though.
    • 04/05/2004
    • 04:22:15
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Thanks

    Thank you :D
    • 27/04/2004
    • 13:43:52
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.