I enjoyed this essay because of the summary, which is very well told- not too long, but includes enough information. I would give the author a few tips of how to make this a more affective essay in the attempt to prove that Is is a heroine in the book. First, i do like the definition at the beginning but I think adding one of those great quotes before it may be more affective in grabbing your readers attention. Lastly, giving more examples from the book of Is' characteristics may give a more affective argument of how Is is a suitable heroine.
- 04/05/2004
- 16:48:47
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.