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  • Good info, Bad writing

    Like it is in the title. Your writing is too informal and consists a couple of run-ons. However, it's great work for a 9th grader. Keep it up! I'm in college so maybe I become too picky :P
    • 30/03/2005
    • 02:50:36
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Good Paper

    This paper has amany information in it. However, some paragraph spacing was quite akward. I know that you try to stress each point by making one sentense a whole paragraph, but I think it's unnessasary. It just makes the work feel like that you want to increase the space so that you can hit the requirment.Also the paragraph:This is a true stage theory, meaning that Freudians believe that we all go through these stages, in this order, and pretty close to these ages. These stages of sexuality are probably what Freud is most known for.seems to be a bad transition and redudent at expressing your point. You should communicate more things as comments to Frueds theories as it is concluding them.Well, overall, it's good work. I learned something from it.
    • 09/11/2004
    • 10:09:38
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Disappointing conclusion

    Everything was quite well written until the ending came, where it seems to be there just for ending's sake.
    • 08/11/2004
    • 04:16:56
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Very Informing

    Essay teaches us about important everyday knowledges. It is well organized and contains a good ammount of information.
    • 08/11/2004
    • 04:10:24
    • Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Quite Good

    Good information. Some small grammer errors, but overall well written.
    • 03/11/2004
    • 22:05:50
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Interesting

    Very informative. However, the ending could be improved on. The information was very well presented.
    • 03/11/2004
    • 10:26:44
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Not Bad

    Pretty good for a 9th grader. Some informal terms should be eliminated (diction) and a better intro is needed.
    • 03/11/2004
    • 10:18:07
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
  • Not very good

    The grammer needs to be more formal.
    • 28/10/2004
    • 18:58:32
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.