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Why we should legalize euthanasia
- 1255 words (5 pages)
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Mexicans and their soical issues they face. Talk about their history, culture, family life, and social issues. Includes bibliography
- 1652 words (7 pages)
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"Eating Chinese Food Naked"
- 1010 words (4 pages)
- 31
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Comments List
"Eskimo" or "Inuit" myths about how the world was created
This essay needs a concluson. It just ends. Also try using an attention getter in the introduction, so you keep the audieneces attention. Overall, for an eighth grader this is pretty good!- 12/05/2004
- 10:18:04
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
"Food Fight: The Truth about GMOs"
I think this essay would be better, if they added an introduction. They kinf of just jump right into information. Maybe try adding a attentuon getter, for example, a statistic. The transitions need some work as well. I also believe this paper needs to be more than two paragraphs. Trying developing more on the myths.- 10/05/2004
- 11:00:54
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.