Perhaps you could have used the passive voice in order to make your paper more formal and thus sugest its objectivity.
- 29/09/2006
- 16:18:01
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Thanks for sharing your disgust with the rest of us...you made me laugh...say hi to your non-gayologist friend... :-)
- 25/09/2006
- 15:43:28
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Some of your arguments are really good.
- 21/09/2006
- 15:53:03
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You start 'in medias res', without any introduction, which I find inappropriate for essay writing.
- 21/09/2006
- 15:51:52
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I believe that your essay would be much better with the use of formal language.
- 21/09/2006
- 15:49:51
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It is always advisable to have an introduction announcing what the essay is about.
- 21/09/2006
- 15:47:24
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A well written essay. I enjoyed reading it very much.
- 08/07/2006
- 18:26:59
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It's nice to see what led to the creation, be it the novel or the film.
- 07/07/2006
- 02:00:10
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You made some really good points throughout your essay, perhaps the conclusion could have been a bit longer.
- 04/07/2006
- 16:42:12
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you could have elaborated further on the conclusion, still, well done.
- 04/07/2006
- 16:37:19
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Thanks for the great essay! It will help me with mine.
- 04/07/2006
- 16:30:02
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Perhaps you could have made a compare and contrast essay using the arguments listed.That way it could have been more effective.
- 15/06/2006
- 11:18:39
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
The conclusion could have been further elaborated on, this way it seemes that you intended it to be as brief as possible.
- 26/04/2006
- 04:54:45
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I enjoyed reading your essay, and I especially liked the introduction and the way you tried to make a parallel between Shakespeare's time and the modern age. However, I do believe that the style could have been more formal.
- 26/04/2006
- 04:48:38
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It seemed to me while reading this essay that it was in fact a first draft of a future essay. I believe that it could have been further developed and improved. Still the points you made were good.
- 26/04/2006
- 04:41:56
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I loved it! Great style and content.All the important factors have been included that point out the person behind the name.
- 28/05/2004
- 08:33:59
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I especially liked the introduction. Very smooth transitions, thank you, it helped me with my essay.
- 09/05/2004
- 11:16:49
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I must say that although we closely viwed this book in class, this aspect never came up. I found it very interesting.
- 09/05/2004
- 06:21:40
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I really liked it. It gives a close comparisson of the novel and the modern film.All the important sequences have been included, and closely analized.it helped me a lot in my own research.thank you.
- 09/05/2004
- 06:10:32
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.