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  • An essay about how social classes played a huge part in the american revolution.,

    It has been my experience through honors and AP english and History classes that first person shouldnt be used. If you are trying to persuade, you need not give your opinion which could be based off of anything, but give concrete detail along with commentary to full support your thesis. However, Im not saying that your first person examples used were incorrect or that you cant use them because of course there is exceptional times to do so, but keep it minimul and more to the true facts. I just thought this might help for future refrences so you would know, if you already didnt, that teachers dont like first person inless it is a personal narrative. I liked your piece though, it was very informative.
    • 06/05/2002
    • 23:48:34
    • Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.