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  • Suggestion:

    Use "do not" and "they are" rather than don't and they're - this is a sign of a less experienced writer - however, the content was very refreshing. I encourage you to continue to write. Practice makes perfect and I am still practicing.
    • 30/07/2004
    • 16:04:12
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.