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  • Essay

    The essay i think when you went to get the facts had many, but when you started writing you randomly picked them so the organization was poor. The details on the other hand were great. If you spend more time on the essay it would have been better. But great essay.
    • 24/05/2004
    • 13:03:45
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Skin Cancer

    its an ok essay. but ur ideas are incomplete and its short. unless your in a small grade i dout it being 97%
    • 21/05/2004
    • 19:20:00
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    GOod reacherching. the grammer and spelling was a lil bad but good essay
    • 20/05/2004
    • 14:03:10
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • A Hard Lesson In Love.

    Unbleiliveable!!!! Way cool. so great so touching...
    • 20/05/2004
    • 11:37:45
    • Score: 15 out of 22 people found this comment useful.
  • Essay

    it an ok essay but extremly short. and the biggining needs editing. and it looks like you copied it from another site. just guessin
    • 19/05/2004
    • 19:20:11
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok

    its .. ok but a lil boring. it should have some exitment and editing
    • 19/05/2004
    • 14:45:33
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Porphyria's Lover

    another nice job. exellent. super job. u started a lil bad but then went super good
    • 19/05/2004
    • 14:44:15
    • Score: 32 out of 41 people found this comment useful.
  • Good!

    good job. another wonderful essay! super.
    • 19/05/2004
    • 14:21:29
    • Score: 40 out of 46 people found this comment useful.
  • GREAT

    GREAT! THE BEST ESSAY I HAVE EVER READ. GOOD INFO AND THE POEM U HAVE NOTICED IS ASOME. GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!
    • 19/05/2004
    • 11:37:59
    • Score: 45 out of 61 people found this comment useful.
  • Essay`\

    good essay. it would be better if you'd givin it a nice conclusion and a better intro. But its a great essay . and u included ur bibliography
    • 19/05/2004
    • 11:35:03
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    good job! great but a lil editing might do the trick!
    • 18/05/2004
    • 15:41:13
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • NICE!!!

    nice long essay! it is cool and it explains everything. i rated good. it was nice to include a bibliography!
    • 18/05/2004
    • 15:15:00
    • Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Cool

    nice essay i think a lil editing
    • 17/05/2004
    • 16:43:05
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good

    great essay! well rightin
    • 17/05/2004
    • 16:35:12
    • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • You should have

    you should have edit it alot! other wise great!
    • 17/05/2004
    • 16:33:28
    • Score: 7 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
  • Ok

    its ok but it would be better if it had fluency. The sentences should be longer and link with the other sentences
    • 17/05/2004
    • 16:12:41
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Essay

    good essay it would be better if you said it as a " 3rd " person view. It is good tho. ( that was just my idea i dunt no about anyone else)
    • 17/05/2004
    • 15:39:49
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    goood essay
    • 15/05/2004
    • 12:37:20
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • ....

    you must be talented. i remember my dad(very talented) usta tell me somthing similer
    • 15/05/2004
    • 11:47:20
    • Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
  • O ya!

    i would definitly agree! i would do the same if i had a milion dollars!
    • 15/05/2004
    • 11:45:02
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • GREAT!

    just nice. super essay! i will give it a VERY GOOD MARK!!!
    • 15/05/2004
    • 11:39:15
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.