Here are a few examples,As the winters ice began to melt off more and more hundreds upon hundreds more dead fishAs the scientists continued to work they found many piles of dead fishPlus you use chemical symbols and no explanation.
- 20/06/2004
- 16:56:06
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Nicely written and you make your point very clear.....
- 21/05/2004
- 19:03:52
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Your basic concept is ok but you need to do more research. FM can travel ass far as AM when you apply enough power. FM can travel through most structures, that is why your house phone is in the GHz range.
- 17/05/2004
- 20:59:35
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Good facts...problem presented very well.
- 17/05/2004
- 20:35:00
- Score: 5 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Does not follow the structure of an essay.
- 17/05/2004
- 20:31:32
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Need to polish it up a bit but otherwise good info.
- 17/05/2004
- 20:27:17
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You gave a very nice account of making of the Constitution.
- 17/05/2004
- 10:20:23
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Nicely written but you need to check the actor in Multiplicity it was Michael Keaton not Billy Crystal.
- 16/05/2004
- 09:19:27
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Althrough imperfect the the Electoral College as proven itself over the long haul.
- 16/05/2004
- 00:13:42
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I like this Essay. I read from beginning to end.
- 15/05/2004
- 23:59:24
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.