This is a great essay. You developed all of your points fully and had a good working thesis throughout your paper. Well done.
- 29/09/2006
- 16:00:25
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This probably should have been reformatted before submission as it made the experimant harder to follow, but you did clearly explain yourself. Did you need to discuss anything about error in measurement?
- 29/09/2006
- 15:39:32
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is a very advanced paper and much of it went over my head, but it was still conscise and well organized.
- 29/09/2006
- 15:36:11
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This essay is accurate but seems to be lacking depth. Try working on your introductions and conclusions for a fuller paper.
- 29/09/2006
- 15:33:33
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
You did a good job interpreting Keat's poem "To Autumn", and I think you also hit on some of the important views that Keats viewed in life.
- 29/09/2006
- 15:30:20
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I enjoyed reading this paper and found it very informative, but I think the end may have been cut off... I would like to know what your sources were too.
- 07/02/2006
- 19:06:23
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
You do a good job emphasizing your strengths and what you intend to do for your audience. But generally, I think it isn't a good idea to begin a speech with an apology, even for a technical difficulty. Instead, a joke would fit better. Once you apologize in a public speech, then you end up having to use the rest of your speech trying to convince your audience why they should listen, where otherwise, they would never know to expect a power point.
- 22/01/2006
- 20:11:39
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
You outline some important points to inform a generica audience about diabetes, but your ending is abrupt and offers no real conclusion to your readers.
- 19/01/2006
- 00:05:25
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Although this is an informal essay, you do a good job clairfying the differences between the three types. It seems with the current trends, more and more people will consent to writing 'living wills' in the future.
- 05/01/2006
- 05:19:34
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is a good essay but it would have been easier to read if it were in paragraph format.
- 12/12/2005
- 16:37:52
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a facinating topic and you covered it very well. You stated your thesis clearly and explained yourself without going into too much detail, which seems appropriate for your intended audience. Great job.
- 12/12/2005
- 16:33:10
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is a good informative paper but I believe that you should be writing "Marine Corps" instead; the 's' is silent.
- 06/12/2005
- 11:48:45
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
What was the purpose of your goal? What benefit did you expect to see and did you see them? I agree that the importance of drinking water is under-rated, so to improve this essay you could develop more about why you wanted to do this.
- 06/12/2005
- 11:34:27
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a good point of view and you atate your case very clearly. But, in addition to stating the authors you quote, it is very important to reference the work it came from with publications information and page numbers in a standard format like MLA.
- 05/12/2005
- 15:25:27
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This serves as a good general overview of the effects of video games on children, but your points would have more strength if you listed the sources of your statistics and facts.
- 01/12/2005
- 01:09:17
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
I enjoyed reading your take on this sonnet. Even though I've read it before, your essay gave a clear interpretation of its importance and what it means to you. Good Job
- 21/11/2005
- 20:31:34
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This is very helpful in clarifying the differences in these two professions and you answered a lot of my questions about them. You have a lot of good stuff here, but it could be better in essay form.
- 16/11/2005
- 00:35:35
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Depending on translation, Job 3:2 is shorter... A menial point, I know but interesting to some.
- 11/11/2005
- 14:10:45
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
A Global Nomad.
- 03/11/2005
- 09:11:33
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
What a great paper! My sister has this condition and I never even knew this much about it. I am so glad that you were able to say everything you said as well as you said it so that more people can understand what CAH is. Thank you for writing this.
- 31/10/2005
- 21:19:40
- Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
I enjoyed reading this essay and found it very helpful for me to see the opposing view of a topic many feel so strongly about, and you presented your argument with excellence. I hope this gets well rated even by those who may not agree with your position.
- 28/10/2005
- 23:22:50
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Your first line is right from Wikipedia...
- 10/10/2005
- 21:06:23
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This paper was really interesting to read but it lacks a strong ending. Now I want to know what happens.
- 10/10/2005
- 20:47:29
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
In all seriousness, have you any inclination to repeat your thorough efforts here to refute other prominent works of major world religions; such as the Bhagavad-Gita, the Koran, or the Book of Mormon? More so, would you come to similar conclusions of their 'mindless insanity'?
- 08/10/2005
- 16:16:52
- Score: 10 out of 12 people found this comment useful.
Spewing water isn't smooth... but otherwise a good review.
- 06/10/2005
- 12:57:54
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
What does it say about our culture that we have come so far from the once considered noble words of the Hippocratic Oath:"I will neither give a deadly drug to anybody who asked for it, nor will I make a suggestion to this effect."You did an excellent job giving an objective view of this touchy subject, and I appreciate your care and opinion.
- 02/10/2005
- 15:08:34
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
How is machoism different than chauvinism? In reference to a "male chauvinist pig" are they the same concepts?
- 29/09/2005
- 10:43:31
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This seems to be very well thought out and factual. You did a good job gathering information and you obviously stand by your opinion but your ending should be less harsh. Regardless of fault no one likes a finger pointed in their face.
- 28/09/2005
- 22:58:46
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is a captivating poem that drives my thoughts down this unending pit of agony called pain. I feel myself falling in this downward spiral... a very powerful piece.
- 28/09/2005
- 22:39:02
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I really like your writing style. It reads just like a well thought out persuasive speech, as if you were having a conversation with me. Great job!
- 28/09/2005
- 22:34:06
- Score: 5 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
This is a really good essay on sociology. You hit all the main points that define sociology and were able to include good descriptions of where you can go with this facinating discipline. I am taking "Principles of Sociology" and may even want to minor in it; it really does open your eyes to things you would normally take for granted.
- 27/09/2005
- 20:26:57
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
The purpose of my essay was to debate a topic, using what ever sources I could find. In their context, the verses I used were applicable and supported my thesis. Even if you don't hold the Bible as any authority, it can be used successfully as a reference.
- 20/09/2005
- 00:45:40
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This has been severely miscategorized...
- 20/09/2005
- 00:33:04
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I really enjoyed reading this essay. My only comment is that your begining story is weak. If it is hypothetical then you to state it, so people aren't mislead. Also the circumstances in the story seem unrealistic. Joseph initially wants to abort the baby, but later is heart broken to see his baby given up for adoption...This is good stuff here, just work with your intro
- 20/09/2005
- 00:24:13
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Though generally not a big fan of GAP I found this essay genuinly interesting, factual, and easy to read. Thanks for submitting this.
- 17/09/2005
- 14:57:07
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is great, very insightful...
- 16/09/2005
- 00:25:06
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is a great, but there seems to be some weird punctuation/capitalization problems.
- 15/09/2005
- 23:41:57
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
This isn't an essay. Like stated in your title, it's research, facts, and nothing more. You might want to write something before turning in a paper to this site.
- 26/08/2004
- 15:52:46
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
That is sinking pretty low to plagerize from one of the most popular newspapers in the nation. Definatly either the lowest or laziest that I could imagine.
- 12/07/2004
- 18:33:19
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Was there a purpose to this paragraph? If there was I missed it... You merely outlined points and stopped at that. Albeit they arn't bad points, but essays that start with a definition usually don't fare well here.
- 12/07/2004
- 18:22:20
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
All of the scientific tests that you used in your essay were based on the adult mind that was decided on his or her sexuality, right? Could these same test be run on a child or infant to 'predict' their future preference? Or is that infringing on their free-will as much as it is to tell someone they are 'supposed' to be straight? You made some excellent points and your skill as a writer is obvious, but your topic doesn't hold water as you present it.
- 10/07/2004
- 04:18:25
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
An excellant essay! I love the fact that Christianity thrives even during persecution, as in the times of the apostles. Also, you touched on the point of the resurrection but failed to mention that without it, Christianity is the same as any other religion (centered around a dead prophet). Just something to consider.
- 03/07/2004
- 10:07:49
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Here is another thing that I have seen in a girl I babysit for. She is five years old and gets on occasion, vaginal infections. "At five?", I thought, but yes, it does happen.
- 03/07/2004
- 09:57:16
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This was another excellently written essay; one that I not only learned from but also enjoyed reading. Keep it up!
- 03/07/2004
- 09:50:54
- Score: 36 out of 42 people found this comment useful.
You definatly have a grasp on what Browning was trying to relate in this somewhat twisted poem. Again, I am very impressed at your interpretation of British/Irish literature. I could have read this essay sooner (My teacher was not near as good as the one you have described).Great Work!
- 01/07/2004
- 06:21:34
- Score: 62 out of 70 people found this comment useful.
After reading this and your other essay on Browning, I am very impressed at your interpretation of British/Irish literature. I just finished AP English 12 and now after studying all of it makes me wish I could have read this essay sooner (My teacher was not as good as the one you have described).Great Work!
- 25/06/2004
- 15:03:42
- Score: 44 out of 48 people found this comment useful.
This essay definatly will give people something to think about, which is a good thing, but personally this issue brings up a good bit of controversy. Like, are there absolutes? Yes, or No? Are you absolutly sure? A ton of good points, but isn't telling the truth the 'right' thing to do?
- 23/06/2004
- 03:27:22
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
"There is no longer any debate among biologists as to whether evolution occurred in the past and is still happening today." That seems to be an awfully lofty statement. Among what biologists? Did you talk to them ALL to find this out? Are you saying that ALL the biologists in the entire world believe in evolution? This just seems to be a childish argument that is not based on "facts", only contradictions.
- 20/06/2004
- 15:27:17
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
My only comment to improve this essay is that it needs a more specific title. "Teenage Life" is too general and says nothing to spark intrest in a reader. But otherwise, very well done.
- 20/06/2004
- 06:34:22
- Score: 6 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
I loved reading this essay. I grew up as a "USMC Brat" and also have quite a bias towards them but even I learned new things after reading this. I know exactly the type of connection you feel with Marines. Because even as the daughter of a Marine, doing push-ups for punishment and other things of that nature, has given me a small share in the pride you expressed in your great essay. Thanks
- 19/06/2004
- 18:55:29
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This essay is good but it would be a whole lot easier to read if it weren't all one giant paragraph.
- 19/06/2004
- 10:28:53
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
What (if any specific types) of groups are you referring to? And then, who are you writing this to? From a business perspective its great, but it seems a little sterile.
- 19/06/2004
- 10:05:10
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I like the way you use facts and opinions in this essay. In the first section you clearly stated the facts concerning all possible views, and you put in your own opinion based on those facts. Well done.
- 07/06/2004
- 05:37:44
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Your research on this subject was obviously very thoroughly conducted and offered many good points to support the death penalty. However, you failed to offer a way to implement it into our current judical system. Nonetheless, well done, but ideas could be expanded.
- 29/05/2004
- 07:47:13
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
You seem to hit all of the major issues about this controversial conflict topic very thoroughly, and make many good points.
- 29/05/2004
- 07:37:51
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This is a good essay that explains the play, but is more than just a plot summary. You made some good points and supported it all. Well done.
- 21/05/2004
- 12:41:15
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I enjoyed this essay and you made some good points in as well.
- 19/05/2004
- 08:54:26
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is an average essay but you didn't tell me anything I didn't already know. The grammar and formatting also leave much to be desired
- 18/05/2004
- 09:07:29
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I enjoyed reading this, and i agree that hollywood did an ok job on this. Maybe similar quotes from each could help strengthen your report even more.
- 18/05/2004
- 08:58:41
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This standard bibliography was very thorough and well done. In my own study of Keats, I have not found more information on him than this author has included, or read any report that was marshalled as well as this. The transitions seem to be abrupt and disconnected within it self, but overall, a good essay.
- 14/05/2004
- 13:55:13
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.