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  • Nice poem

    nice poem even though it slightly ressembles eamons song fu!# it but i still believe that you wrote it nice work very touching
    • 19/05/2004
    • 12:25:01
    • Score: 11 out of 14 people found this comment useful.
  • Where did you find this poem

    this was an extremely well written essay and i liked it so much i would like to know where you found it i like how in all of your writing you tend to get right to the points of relevancy but yet still keep the essay interesting long and well structured one of your best works yet good job john
    • 19/05/2004
    • 12:11:18
    • Score: 62 out of 64 people found this comment useful.
  • Well.....

    i live in florence italy and visit rome frequently some of the information included in your essay was either completely false or exagerated your grade isnt listed so i dont know wether to say your in 5th and a good writer or 11th and a poor writer i was disapointed but yet loved hearing about my own country the government part was ok but the first paragraph was sort of brief non detailed and boring try adding some more mind catching lines but overall an ok essay
    • 19/05/2004
    • 11:52:38
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Powerful

    this was a very powerful poem and at times almost scary. wow. one thing i would change is the 300 word entry describing what a villanelle is it could have been more brief and to the point but other than that it was great i loved the way it related to our normal lives very nice john your a great writer
    • 19/05/2004
    • 11:22:52
    • Score: 46 out of 51 people found this comment useful.
  • Decieving yes

    i agree horoscopes are very decieving as you read them closly you can realize that almost all the things listed can apply to almost anybody you had a very interesting insight about the relation to horoscopes and astronomy you could have put more evidence about the misleading of horoscopes and such but over all a very well written and interesting essay it would be nice if you coud comment on my us revolution paper even though histor is boring
    • 19/05/2004
    • 11:16:00
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
  • Wow

    very well wwritten essay exremely controversial liked how you explained all sides evenly and clearly nice job
    • 19/05/2004
    • 10:55:23
    • Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice

    Very nice essay liked the closing paragraph well done john
    • 19/05/2004
    • 09:56:52
    • Score: 50 out of 55 people found this comment useful.