the first time i shotgunned, i came in second place with about 6 or 7 seconds. i was so proud of myself because i beat a person with experience by like 5 seconds. definitely one of the funnest(is that a word?) drinking games i\'ve played.recommended: ice-cold beer. it numbs your throat quickly after about half a can. carbonation pooring down your throat does not feel pretty. plus, warm beer tastes like shit.
- 21/06/2004
- 21:31:17
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
i lost someone close to me in january as a result of suicide. i figure that maybe if people know what warning signs to look for they could let a loved one know they care before it is too late. it hurts more than you could know without experiencing it yourself to wake up one morning and find out someone died without warning. what hurts even more is knowing that if she only knew how many people cared about her and loved her, she might still be here.
- 01/06/2004
- 07:58:01
- Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
this essay is more a biography on anthony burgess than about A Clockwork Orange. perhaps it should be someplace else on the site?
- 01/06/2004
- 07:23:39
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
in a strange way, this poem reminds me of metallica's song Sad But True. i really think this is excellent creativity at work.
- 01/06/2004
- 06:49:27
- Score: 25 out of 32 people found this comment useful.
you provide an excellent argument. I no longer smoke pot myself, but i fully support legalization. the government would make a lot more money that way anyhow. not only would they be earning from the regulation of sales, but they would still be making money arresting people who sell it illegally.
- 28/05/2004
- 13:03:06
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
you should also note that the adolescent brain is not fully mature until the mid-twenties. the part of the brain that is responsible for judgement is the last part of the brain to form. while an adolescent may commit a crime, it may simply be the result of immature judgement.
- 26/05/2004
- 23:26:26
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
i'm not much of a math wiz, but i do know that rainbows come in full circles, not arcs. sometimes the arc is all you can see of the rainbow though.
- 26/05/2004
- 22:45:12
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
you did a great job of showing how the causes of aggression are eclectic, and how many causes actually come together to determine a person's level of aggression.nothing stuck out to me in the essay as needing improving. its very well written.
- 26/05/2004
- 17:03:43
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
this story is gripping. i loved the way the ending is explained through a newscast. but what became of mustafa? was he the child?
- 26/05/2004
- 16:20:20
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
great information. this essay would be very useful to anyone who needs to write a speech. there is only a single thing i found wrong with this essay, and it seems to simply be a typo:\"Failing to remain on topic can result in the audience becoming confusing and inaccurate, and will often loose the focus and interest of the audience.\"shouldn\'t the first word \"audience\" be \"speech\" instead?either way, this is a very useful essay and very easy to read.
- 26/05/2004
- 14:53:24
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
this is a great essay about Poe's life. on the subject of his stories relating to his life, consider incorporating the story "the mask of the red death". his mother, mrs. allan, and virginia all died of TB. the disease plagued his life, and the story was written about it, though it is not stated directly in the text.i disagree however with him being "one of the greatest gothic style writers of all time". he was THE greatest.
- 26/05/2004
- 13:03:45
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
great essay. hits on many points that are brought up during this debate. also, consider this question:would you grant a right to one group while denying it to another group?my history teacher from school brought that question up. someone said no, but when she realized what it meant, she changed her answer to yes.
- 24/05/2004
- 13:57:00
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
your english is broken, but your point is well made. internet can indeed be considered the 8th wonder of the world. i'm not too sure about ordering pizza though.
- 24/05/2004
- 13:25:19
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
you repeat the same ideas several times throughout your essay, many times in the same sentence. instead of using this repetition, state some fresh ideas or end your essay if you run out of new ideas.
- 24/05/2004
- 12:54:55
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.