im a bit confused ... u need to make this essay alot more clear to us!
- 22/05/2004
- 13:37:09
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
good subject choice! well dun!
- 22/05/2004
- 12:49:08
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
well dun! we could use alot less smokers! you could of used stats tho!well dun tho!
- 22/05/2004
- 12:36:33
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
i like your views on the subject and i liked how your essay almosted flowed due to your relaxed style,well dun
- 22/05/2004
- 12:30:08
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
i liked it! Aspecialy the introduction, well done!
- 22/05/2004
- 12:22:18
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
i thought it was good overall but you need to add more detail and lenght and it would help to put things in chronological order, but overall not bad!
- 22/05/2004
- 12:14:48
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.