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• Convict Life and Punishments in Australia

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• Explain why Aboriginal children of the stolen generations were removed from their parents.

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• How have government policies towards the Aborigines changed between 1901 and 1967?

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• Bruce Barnbaum

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• In WWI, why were conditions in France in 1916 and 1917 so difficult for the Australian Imperial Force (AIF)

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• Why did the allies decide to attack Gallipoli in WW1?

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• There are winners and losers. That's the way of the world.

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• Assess the degree to which African Americans were denied Civil and Human Rights in the southern states of the USA in the decades leading up to the 1950s.

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• What is Surrealism?

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• Based on evidence you have examined, to what extent is it true to say that Mao Zedong was a terrorist or employed terrorist tactics.

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• Do Women get a sporting chance?

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• Area of Study on Prejudice.

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• Biography of Victor Hugo.

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• Biography of Ngo Dinh Diem, 1901-1963.

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• Why did African Americans increasingly turn to violent methods of protest during the 1950s to 1960s?

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• Synthetic Biopolymer: Polylactic Acid or Polylactide (PLA)

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• Newcastle Earthquake Case Study

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• Coping with Teenage Stress

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• Diamond Mining Industry in Australia

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• Memory Text Review: "Memento"

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• Language Analysis of Poem: "Memories" by Jerry Ham

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• What is the ANZAC myth?

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• Assess the impact and significance of Chin Peng's Achievements

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• Ngo Dinh Diem

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• Assess the reliability and usefulness of the documentary 'Prelude to War,' in determining the failure of the League of Nations.

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Comments List

• Excellent Essay

  This really gave me a good insight into what Aristotle was thinking. You should check out the writings of Sophocles who writes on similar topics and provides a contrasting view!
  • 29/08/2009
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• More explanation

  Would have liked more detailed explanation of labour policies which led to the economic slump and downturn during the 1970s. Otherwise very informative.
  • 18/04/2009
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• Nice use of description

  Very good descriptive language and powerful imagery conveyed. Well done
  • 18/04/2009
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• Too Narrative

  Solid facts in there but I feel it sounds too much like you're telling a story rather then getting straight to the point. This essay probably could have been cut down to around 1000 words if you were more concise. In addition I think you need to organise your paragraphs, you have 3 main reasons and over 15 paragraphs? You could have joined many of the paragraphs together, because what you've ended up with is a bunch of weak paragraphs rather then just 3 or 4 solid and concise paragraphs.
  • 16/06/2005
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• Agreed

  I completely agree with you glengem, you can not simply say he is not a hero because of deeds 'unlike' a hero. I suggest you take a look at Campbells Monomyth Cycle, it is a general pattern of adventures that mythological heros encounter during their quest which is largely used in many modern stories such as Starwars and The Lord of the Rings. Odysseus' adventures fit quite neatly in this cycle and so I think you should reconsider your answer.
  • 12/06/2005
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• Nice Job

  well structured, informative and backed up with evidence. If I had to criticize it, the conclusion could be improved to wrap it all up. All in all well done!
  • 01/08/2004
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  • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.