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  • Quite impressive

    really good peice of work, you really analysed the poem with effecive peices of language.keep it up.
    • 22/10/2004
    • 07:59:55
    • Score: 33 out of 35 people found this comment useful.
  • That really helped alot

    Good peice of information there, quite persice, and it helped me with my work. However there are some obvious spelling mistakes which should be checked out. over all good peice of work.
    • 05/06/2004
    • 14:30:48
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Nice poem, well done

    i like the first person view, gives a more effect, like if its coming from the actually person, good job.
    • 05/06/2004
    • 06:51:02
    • Score: 13 out of 13 people found this comment useful.
  • Very powerfull poem

    That is quiet a powerfull poem, 1 or 2 spelling mistakes, but that doesnt matter. A really good poem, especially from the feotus/baby's point of veiw.
    • 02/06/2004
    • 13:03:43
    • Score: 14 out of 16 people found this comment useful.
  • Good peice of work. excellent

    a good peice of work you have written. good use vocabulary and grammer, however grammer could be slightly improved, and so could your sentance strutcure. overall You have nicley deliverd your points. keep up the good work, but at the same time keep in mind of your mistakes, to help you improve.
    • 02/06/2004
    • 05:14:36
    • Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
  • Couldve have been better

    There are some good points, but if this was for a argument, it should've stayed to one sided, to deleiver a better effect, and would be more persuasive. Also the Vocabulary could've been better and need work on the grammer.Overall, good peice of work, but keep in mind of those points and other user coments.
    • 01/06/2004
    • 12:01:22
    • Score: 10 out of 10 people found this comment useful.