Looks like a copy and paste from a management text to me. I guess if you can't write an essay, you can fake it.
- 04/11/2005
- 17:24:35
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Is this a list or an essay? There is no intro or conclusions, just 22 discussion points. I guess you could use this to build an essay.
- 24/06/2005
- 10:05:57
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Good content but your thoughts could be better organised. I found the paper a little difficult to read or follow the authors thought process.
- 24/06/2005
- 10:01:41
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This paper looks like its missing the majority of the content. I would sure have like to have read all of it.
- 20/06/2005
- 21:57:56
- Score: 1 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Although highly unorganised, many of the key ideas are there. I found it a good use of for gaining another perspective on this assignment.
- 13/06/2004
- 13:02:42
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
This paper makes an excellent foundation for anyone else struggling with this assignment. The author has managed to take the ambiguity out of the Let It Pour article and present it in a manner consistent with critical thinking.I was able to actually use this paper to get a jump start on my and expand it into a grade A paper.
- 13/06/2004
- 12:58:50
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
The overall content is pretty good. Weak intro / summary. I didn't find out the point behind the paper until I read the conclusion, which should have been a little more involved. With a proper intro and conclusion, it would make a very good college level essay.
- 13/06/2004
- 11:39:38
- Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Very well done except for the introduction and conclusion. Covers the project planning essentials.
- 13/06/2004
- 10:37:29
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
This looks more like a letter than a book report. If the student was asked to present it creatively, then its an interesting approach. If so, good commentary.
- 13/06/2004
- 10:34:02
- Score: 7 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
Very well written, good use of essay format and structure... but no sources. There is no citing within the text... where did the figures come from. Makes it very hard to use or verify the content.I would normally give this a high rating because it is very well written, but without out the citing of sources at a 2nd year college level - it becomes average.
- 13/06/2004
- 10:10:28
- Score: 2 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
It's been a long time since I read the novel and seen the movie... but this is more like a cut and paste from the book and not an essay. Two thumbs down.
- 13/06/2004
- 10:02:07
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Content is solid and footnotes good. This is more of a freshman level essay than a 4th year senior. Structure needs reworking. I would say it is a good essay based on that criteria.
- 13/06/2004
- 09:59:15
- Score: 4 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
I found this essay confusing and difficult to follow both in content and in structure.
- 13/06/2004
- 09:48:22
- Score: 5 out of 8 people found this comment useful.
The essay contains all the necessary content to meet the objectives of the UoPhx week 1 assignment. Content is excellent. Would restructure it to better match the standard 5 paragraph APA essay format. Other than that - good job.
- 13/06/2004
- 09:45:28
- Score: 3 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
The title doesn't really match the content well. Interesting perspective on how we are accepting of something in one context and unforgiving in another. Interesting content, not very good 1st person narrative. I would say it loses points just on structure.
- 13/06/2004
- 09:36:03
- Score: 3 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Surprising comes to mind when rating this essay. Very, very thorough research and applies the knowledge well throughout the essay. Very good use of language. Only critic is the structure of the essay weakens as you progess through it - but this is grade 10 - so excellent job.
- 13/06/2004
- 09:29:37
- Score: 9 out of 10 people found this comment useful.
Really great content - very poor structure. Does not conform to any accepted paper format even for grade 13. With a little rework it has potential to be a really good essay.
- 13/06/2004
- 09:18:32
- Score: 2 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
Very well written. Its hard to believe an 11th grader wrote this. The writing level is well suited to someone at the college level. Very Good!
- 13/06/2004
- 09:15:26
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
The reason for doing the case study is to add clarity to an ambiguous scenario. The authors wrote the Let It Pour piece with that in mind. You are to exercise your critical thinking skills using a decision making model to add clarity and direction to solving the problem. The author of this piece did not accomplish this goal. But all is not lost. It provides an excellent reference to gain another perspective on how someone else has seen the case and assists you in defining the problems more clearly.
- 13/06/2004
- 08:30:02
- Score: 12 out of 16 people found this comment useful.