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Response to The Importance of Being Earnest Author: Oscar Wilde
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Paragraphing
yo don't forget to break up your ideas into paragraphseg. The visuals were also awesome.(introducin idea) then examples the:n Those were the things that made the movie good, not the story. after which you left a space that was good and well strustured but u left it in the same paragraph as your comments about the new characters =) otherwise awesome work an i defnitly dont think ill bother with the Harry Potter movie!- 11/06/2004
- 22:51:42
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Linking
Hey that was good for a 9th grade essay. but to improve it try linking the ideas of his history to themes and motifs in his books- 11/06/2004
- 22:40:46
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