Although the content of the essay is well thought out, it has a few grammatical errors. the essay does not flow as well as it should, however with a little revision it could become an A+ essay
- 14/06/2004
- 21:41:54
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
Very touching, emotional. Good Essay, definitley!
- 13/06/2004
- 16:40:45
- Score: 8 out of 11 people found this comment useful.
can u email me an essay on Electoral reform? i'm in status pending, i should recieve my points in a couple o' days
- 13/06/2004
- 16:34:01
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
i have known people who have served in the past (veitnam). it is extremely important for us to know what values and ethics are conformed to.Good developemnt of writing, an essay well done
- 11/06/2004
- 00:42:01
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
good essay structure, and good use of resources. a followup/ continuation of womens rights would be nice also
- 11/06/2004
- 00:37:57
- Score: 9 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
Good essay, definitly shows your points. a little unecessary perhaps
- 11/06/2004
- 00:30:50
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
due to request, here is a short version of my Works Cited for this Paper. I hope you find it useful. -Works Cited: "The Recording Industry is Trying to Kill the Goose That Lays the Golden Egg" Dan Bricklin, http://www.bricklin.com/recordsales.htm "Copy Protection Robs The Future" Dan Bricklin, http://www.bricklin.com/robfuture.htm "The Internet Debacle - An Alternative View" Janis Ian; Performing Songwriter Magazine http://www.janisian.com/article-internet_debacle.html "Downloads Did Not Cause The Music Slump, But They Can Cure It" Mariko Zapf, Forrester Research- Press Release http://www.forrester.com/ER/Press/Release/0,1769,741,FF.html Clear-Channel Information http://content.clearchannel.com/corporate/article/10K2001PrintReady.pdf -p.s. All in-text quotes have been cited properly; due to the format of this website it is not clear how well it came out.
- 11/06/2004
- 00:27:35
- Score: 12 out of 12 people found this comment useful.