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• Japanese Internment during WWII

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• To Kill a Mockingbird Allusions

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• Analysis of "The Catch" by Stanley Kunitz

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• David Oppenheimer the Father of Vancouver

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• Joseph Stalin's Character Summary

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• The Source of All Fears

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• Grammar...

  I don't know what level this was aimed for but grammar need A LOT of improvement. Fragmented sentences all over the place, commas where they shuldn't be, a lot of sentences are very short something like what a 5th grader would do. Content wise it's ok but still quite disorganised.If I was marking this I'd give it a C-.
  • 25/09/2004
  • 16:08:18
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  Excellent use of imagery, I can practically see my self standing in the candy store. Maybe there should have been a concluding paragraph in stead of jsut a couple of sentences.
  • 25/09/2004
  • 15:59:23
  • Score: 4 out of 5 people found this comment useful.