This is quite a good piece though informal at stages and goes from the third person to using "I". It discusses the many aspects of coke's success, in relation to brands in a general sense.
- 09/08/2004
- 06:32:40
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a pretty good piece as it provides a good overview of the impacts of the internet in business. It covers all the main issues and impacts of the internet on marketing research and uses online surveys as an example. This provides a good starting point to delve further into the issues stated.
- 09/08/2004
- 06:25:43
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This piece begins quite poorly and then goes on to border on erotica. It changes tenses, it goes from past to present. Grammar needs to be checked it reads as a bunch of thoughts thrown together. Though good in its descriptions, not sure if some are necessary or appropriate to get the point across!!!!
- 09/08/2004
- 06:16:22
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
There are some good points that had they been explored further could have been better. Though, overall i found it to be too wordy, poor expression, and it jumped from one idea to another without articulating or exploring them coherently.
- 09/08/2004
- 06:10:18
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
This essay does bring up some major points with research to validate its assertions. Though it attempts to cover too many issues, its major shortcoming and there are issues with its expression and grammar.
- 18/07/2004
- 03:28:12
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
provides an informative piece on the stages involved. Ignoring the context this piece was written on, it fails to critique his theories in relation to other developmental theories. Practical examples would help substantiate or critisise his theory
- 18/07/2004
- 03:01:42
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
It defines all the elements that effect it, clearly. Yet fails to take into account that, success is highly depedent on perception and the process of socialisation, as people learn values and attitudes and how this views in a relative sense what success is!!!
- 17/06/2004
- 08:49:46
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.