This article was informative and had many fine points that could have been expanded. Anorexia is a terrible, emotional disorder that needs to be kept in the "public's eye". There were many things I was unaware of regarding this deadly disease.However, it is difficult for me to see that this is from a third-year college student. There are structural errors in many sentences and it would have benefited from proofreading. Switching dialogue to first-person in the conclusion throws off the reader and distracts from the serious topic.
- 30/06/2004
- 06:29:26
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