Very good, very informative. Maybe some more history facts and dates would add more value to the text.
- 28/12/2007
- 15:43:17
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I like your essay because it is very long and very informative. Only one suggestion...references!
- 31/08/2007
- 07:40:55
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Very informative for somebody like me... I have no idea about laptops.
- 27/04/2007
- 07:52:47
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I like this essay a lot! Maybe because I am a woman too :-) "Women are not only going to colleges now, but they are graduating and going on to make some of the most important decisions in people's lives." - This is so true! I would expand it a little more because it is very extended and great subject.
- 21/10/2006
- 20:16:51
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Good, well organized essay. I like the way that you divided it into different paragraphs. One suggestion: I would expend it little more because it is very extended subject.
- 21/10/2006
- 20:11:02
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Wow, very subjective essay. I can understand your point of view but maybe you should think about the other side as well.
- 16/10/2006
- 10:58:26
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Good essay, very informative but as a bibliography it misses all research. Where did you find all that information? I believe that there is a lot of interesting websites about her life. I would add couple to make it more interesting.For example:http://nobelprize.org/nobel_prizes/peace/laureates/1979/teresa-bio.html
- 09/10/2006
- 12:16:04
- Score: 0 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I like the idea: psychology and religion - very interesting! I can see that you put a lot of work into that subject and as a result I see a very interesting essay. I like your organization and sources. Good job!
- 09/10/2006
- 12:11:00
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Very informative for somebody such as myself with no background in this subject. Thx.
- 08/10/2006
- 11:19:15
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I like you essay a lot, especially organization and structure. I like the order you use: first you explain what it is, then if suicide is legal, moral concept, and finally your own opinion. I agree with you on that subject that person has right to chose. I also admire your research, looks that you put a lot of work into this essay.
- 08/10/2006
- 11:09:50
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I think that you should develop that essay little more. This subject is very expended and controversial in today's society so it should not suffer from lack of information. For example you haven't talked about chemicals imbalance in the brain when suicide occurs. This looks more like class notes.
- 08/10/2006
- 11:01:18
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Short but very into the point. I remember that story and my feeling after I read it but your essay summarizes everything again and reminds me what is the most important in our lives. Even though your essay is short you got all the main point across... makes reader think!
- 06/10/2006
- 08:23:53
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I like your essay. First while reading I thought that this seems like a commercial but then I notice that you provide weaknesses in ZOOTS as well as solutions to those - great essay and organization.
- 06/10/2006
- 08:16:28
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Very informative essay. Before reading this essay I didn't know that much about this religion. I think this essay is great entrance into learning more on this subject. Great sources!
- 06/10/2006
- 08:10:17
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Very informative essay and well organized! I love the idea of talking about both sides of the subject. First you say that "home schooled child may become socially deprived" and then: "there are, however, so many other ways to develop a child's social skills" - that makes it look like you are arguing with you own supporting points - great style.
- 06/10/2006
- 07:58:36
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Before reading this essay I didn't know that much about home schooling but now I see that this subject is very interesting. I think that essay is very well written but may be you should think about looking at the other side of the matter. Great organization!
- 06/10/2006
- 07:53:17
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I like your essay but there is one thing that I would change: while reading first paragraph I had no idea what book are you talking about. I believe that you should stayed in first sentence or at eat least in first paragraph that book that you writing about is called Gulliver and provide author as well. Other then that I like you analysis especially that you talk about every four of the books
- 06/10/2006
- 07:47:12
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I like your essay a lot; it was fairly thorough in presenting both sides of the argument. I also like your facts, your presentation is clear and easy to read: by using highlights it makes easier to find info that we are looking for. Everything is in a right place and in good order. I believe that we can learn a lot because you provide a lot of helpful information for somebody who doesn't know a lot about that subject.
- 02/10/2006
- 08:16:53
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
I like your essay a lot. It was great that you explain where the world euthanasia came from and what dose it mean. I also like your facts, your presentation is clear and easy to read. Everything is in place and in good order. Paragraph about Dr. Kevorkian gives your a essay very serious look and it shows that you did research and put a lot of work and thought into this essay.One thing that I would change is paragraph that starts with: When doctors receive their license ... - I would expend it little more. Great job!
- 02/10/2006
- 08:08:16
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I like your essay a lot but you could provide citations so we could check information. I totally agree on subject of essay that cost of war is so big that we could find so much better use for that money. I was shocked to read that "For the cost of one day of war waged against Iraq, the United States could significantly impact treatment for the 40 million people worldwide living with HIV." Very interesting topic!
- 09/03/2006
- 16:54:59
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I really like your essay, it has introduction and that you explain what is ethics and it has conclusion. If I can suggest something, maybe there should be some examples on ethical behavior or not ethical.
- 02/07/2004
- 18:28:43
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I really like this essay, while reading it I feel like I have to know what happened next. I just think that you should add introduction and conclusion.
- 02/07/2004
- 18:05:15
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.