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  • Ballet

    There is enough info about the topic, but it was hard to see. The grammar was a little messing, and I do not believea sentence should start "But." However, the essay did change my eye throughout it, the details are good and attract you to subject. Overall, I think the essay should just be review and put together tighter.
    • 18/05/2002
    • 10:47:25
    • Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.