The ideas in this essay is presented in a very interesting way especially, for a person who is going to go to High School.The author states 3 important lessons that he learned in 4 years in high school which I think is very appealing.
- 19/10/2004
- 17:32:43
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I really liked this essay. The development is clear and very well supported. Also, the author has nice thesis statement.
- 19/10/2004
- 17:18:12
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
It seems to be clear comprehensive essay. However, the inroduction seems to be very long and descriptive. Some of the information that is stated in the introduction should be in the body. On the other hand, the writer presents the statements in a very understandable and apparent way.
- 19/10/2004
- 17:10:19
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I liked this essay since it the mentions some interesting ideas about the stereotipical roles that society place on men. Also, the author use a good English, i.e., sentences, spelling, varied expression, grammatical correctness.
- 10/10/2004
- 12:19:32
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
This is appealing story about English grammar. However, the writer did not follow the essay format. In other words, there is no clear introduction,body or conclusion. On the other hand, the information that is presented seems to be interesting and may be helpful for people who want to learn English grammar.
- 10/10/2004
- 12:13:36
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a detailed essay. The author is clear about his/her statements and support the idea of sex in our society.
- 10/10/2004
- 12:07:20
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Very good and detailed essay. The writer focuses on the biography of Fuller. In addition to that, the essay contains good grammar and organization.
- 06/10/2004
- 21:33:08
- Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.
Interesting story. Gives many evidence to support the article.
- 06/10/2004
- 21:23:59
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Not clear organized. It doesn't have thesis statement. Some of the ideas are poorly expressed.
- 06/10/2004
- 21:20:00
- Score: 3 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Some of the ideas are great using example but others lack support.
- 06/10/2004
- 21:16:01
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
Good description of Spain. It is clear and comprehensive essay using good English such as sentence structure, spelling and varied expressions.
- 06/10/2004
- 21:12:33
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Very well organized and easy to comprehend.Also,the author of this essay uses good writing skills, however he/she does not necessary support everything what he/she says.
- 06/10/2004
- 20:31:13
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.