i think it is a very thought out essay but i could have taken out the satire stuff bcz it makes no sense and i doubt any one really cares but other than that i liked it
- 28/05/2002
- 09:36:57
- Score: 8 out of 9 people found this comment useful.
I thought this essay had enought info. but she didnt make it obvious. she mad ethe reader look for it and her sentance structure wasnt that great either bcz most of her sentances started w/ BUT However, ect. if she thought about how the reader would see it nd then put it in that perspective then it would be a higher rating
- 18/05/2002
- 17:02:35
- Score: 5 out of 5 people found this comment useful.
This essay is good and has a lot of strong pionts but it has not actual personal piont of views and it relates too much to the book on hand! if the author thought more about the thesis and wrote a brief description and personal comments about it them it would be better
- 18/05/2002
- 16:54:04
- Score: 4 out of 4 people found this comment useful.