for the subject of dreams, something that can be put very creatively, it seemed a little bland like you didn't know exactly what you were aiming at. But the subject and the beginning is marvelous.
- 08/09/2004
- 21:12:53
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
i don't think i was smoking anything then... but i can't remember... I've written a few essays like this and the only key to doing it is reaching in your past and connecting everything with a memory. I actually had to rewrite this essay and the second version is much better. If i get more comments, ill put the new one up. Thanks tons!<3 Emily
- 08/09/2004
- 20:47:04
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
I worked for so long to become a super user just so I could read your full essay. It's great, even though by the time I became a super user, it was too late to use it for school.
- 21/08/2004
- 13:31:52
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
I'm so glad you all liked it!!! I hope my teacher will too. He's got a great sense of humor. and to cuet... It happens to us all when we smoke too much... actually... uhhh... i forgot what i was talking about... ;-)
- 19/08/2004
- 20:45:07
- Score: 6 out of 6 people found this comment useful.
Thanks for the compliment. I'm only 15 so it was difficult to write without the adult experience!
- 19/08/2004
- 17:17:43
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.