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  • Formatting.

    The format isn't that great and thats what made your essay really difficult to read. Also my lecturers often stress how essential it is to have one idea per paragraph. For an essay written in 1994 it contains sufficient information but should be tinkered with to make it flow.
    • 24/10/2005
    • 08:28:46
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.