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  • Somehow it's not good, but not bad!

    "...to the point of extinction.." --> edgeNo organization.Poor transition!Good idea but not personalized!Some wordiness mistakes!
    • 13/10/2004
    • 22:31:24
    • Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
  • Good idea!

    Good idea!
    • 13/10/2004
    • 22:22:14
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.