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  • Interesting style

    This essay displayed an interesting and unique tone. However, the evidence to support your facts are lacking. For example, quotes would enhance your argument a lot more. Thanks.
    • 30/10/2004
    • 23:10:51
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • NOt enought evidence

    This essay lacks application of actual theory and evidence.
    • 30/10/2004
    • 23:09:23
    • Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.