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  • Hmm... Well researched and warranted!

    I liked the essay (although disagreed with the overall thesis). Overall, your essay was very well-written and well-worded... Also, you were well-researched with many credited sources... However, if I were given the same assignment... I would have chosen a different overall thesis. Also, in the conclusion, I would advise against using the word, "deviance" to describe the British police as a whole... That's just going a bit too far... But overall, very well-written!
    • 28/02/2007
    • 16:18:06
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • Bravo!

    Finally! An essay that praises the western world instead of aimlessly bashing it! Bravo!
    • 01/02/2007
    • 21:32:54
    • Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
  • I like it but...

    I liked your essay... It was sophisticated in its diction and it was very intriguing... But could you make it a little longer maybe?
    • 03/09/2006
    • 16:17:30
    • Score: 0 out of 0 people found this comment useful.