the essay is well structured and provided for an interesting read
- 05/02/2009
- 18:45:30
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This is a rather short and brief essay and you could probably expand on your points. Overall though, you have the basic idea so this has the potential to be a good essay.
- 26/07/2005
- 06:19:11
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
wow this was an excellent analysis. You expressed yourself quite articulately, well done!
- 01/05/2005
- 04:08:01
- Score: 1 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Your views are okay althought it would help if you expressed them in more formal terms.
- 01/05/2005
- 04:07:10
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Your interpretation of "How do I Love Thee" was very well done. This was well analysed.
- 01/05/2005
- 04:06:52
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This was an okay essay answering the question. You addressed the questions and your response was succinct. You'd need to do a more in-depth investigation to address more specific points.
- 01/05/2005
- 04:02:23
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
your essay was pretty comprehensive and you covered the topic quite well. It was also pretti indepth. All in all, an interesting read!
- 01/05/2005
- 03:58:24
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a very structured recount. It's good to see how specific the evaluations were.
- 06/04/2005
- 08:46:19
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
this was very articulately expressed and generally very well done. However, you could have elaborated a lot more on the aspects which contributed to his downfall.
- 06/04/2005
- 08:44:30
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This is a very thorough investigation on the \"Effect of Acid Rain on Seed Germination\". Good use of structure and its also good to see so many cited sources.
- 06/04/2005
- 08:42:03
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This is quite a good piece of analysis. You pulled together the 3 texts and linked them quite well although you could've been more specific about some of the techniques. eg. specify which instance The Matrix conveys the idea of rebellion using which camera technique.
- 10/03/2005
- 07:45:44
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Hi reading through it again, it seems that you've copied ur notes twice.
- 08/03/2005
- 07:48:17
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
A fair overview of the syllabus dotpoints on Motors And Generators. However, you could've been more specific by writing in full sentences.
- 08/03/2005
- 07:37:22
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This is a well structured and well researched paper. Good range of bibliograhies. Well done.
- 08/03/2005
- 07:36:02
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Your content isn't bad but it could be improved with a more comprehensive understanding of the process. Hope this helps.
- 02/03/2005
- 05:36:09
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Good insight into the Myer brothers business. A fairly substantial and comprehensive overview of the business.
- 02/03/2005
- 04:44:52
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i think you've repeated the second last paragraph. Good ending, neatly structured.
- 11/02/2005
- 02:43:23
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your report was quite concise and succinct. I found it extremely useful since u've pulled together a lot of stuff i couldn't find.
- 11/02/2005
- 00:37:22
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Your coverage of the Pauline Hanson affair was quite adequate although There were some grammatical errors in your work which you probably should edit out.
- 24/01/2005
- 15:09:20
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I found your report a little basic and quite lacking in places (eg. you could put in a conclusion). Your analysis wasn't too bad although i felt you could have elaborated on it. Such as how it is dependent on reaction rate etc. Overall an alright report.
- 22/01/2005
- 04:11:14
- Score: 3 out of 3 people found this comment useful.
I've been wanting to do Edward Scissorhands for my supplementary text but i never knew where to start. You gave a perfect analysis which really helped me! Overall i thought it was an excellent essay, well structured and witty. Well done!
- 22/01/2005
- 03:56:57
- Score: 2 out of 4 people found this comment useful.
I really needed an example of how to analyse a film as an additional material. I felt you covered Sliding Doors quite well in your essay and i was amazed by the links you made to the imaginative journey. Well done! This was also a well structured and thoughful essay.
- 22/01/2005
- 03:54:15
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
Your analysis of lime tree bower my prison was quite adequate in a sense as you covered some basic techniques. However, it would've been nice if you delved into more detail and elaborated on some other techniques that continued throughout the poem.
- 22/01/2005
- 03:51:49
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.
This was a great essay in terms of content and expression. It really helped me to complete my own assignment on european logistics and the Google casestudy helped me to understand this better. Thanks!
- 12/12/2004
- 21:59:50
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
May i suggest that for your risk assessment, the risks involved would be the possibility that the bob could be unintentionally dropped or swung to hit another person. Also, standard laboratory procedures should be undertaken such as footware.
- 30/11/2004
- 21:14:59
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This essay is a good analysis of the main techniques and the expression was also well done. However, you could've covered some more techniques such as the representation of time through the shifting sands etc.
- 24/11/2004
- 01:26:44
- Score: 1 out of 1 people found this comment useful.