Well written essay. If more outside sources were used, the quality could be improved. Online sources are not always the most reliable. Very good essay though.
- 30/05/2002
- 15:00:09
- Score: 7 out of 7 people found this comment useful.
I agree with Rhonduski. I still do not understand fully what pellagra is.. maybe you can include a better description on how it effected the enitire world.
- 30/05/2002
- 14:53:56
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.
Good essay. You shouldn't open a paragraph with the words 'Secondly' or 'Thirdly.' It makes it sound less professional. Great essay though! :)
- 30/05/2002
- 14:50:01
- Score: 2 out of 2 people found this comment useful.